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Whisper In A Dream

let out at its scene
live to what is free
a paradox king
whisper in a dream

whisper in a scene
crowd an allergic king
pay attention floating scene
commercial to its fame

let go of its tremendous charm
we fight to let go
the beach toward you
love means more to me

filled out through a quaint mystery
love has it's turn
another page is worn
high a zipper no it all

better pace at a nearby mall

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love each moment with a tongue filled tide;
Relax as we encounter the moment we depend

Mario Vitale

author comment

if you want to enjoy
stay on the beech

till sun the far horizon
does reach

he will beseech

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