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Other Heroes

Comes another hero from the fray,
No tall steed to ride this day.
A shield and sword are neither had,
No metal suit the blows to pad.

This other hero is of course,
Who steels the blade and shoes the horse.
Who shines the armor mirror bright,
Preparing those who are to fight.

The least among victorious bands,
And with defeat in slavery's hands.
A battle lost for shoe not nailed,
How frequently is smithy hailed?

Unseen in thick of daily dust,
The toil we perceive a must.
In heroes light they too should bask,
Those doers of the thankless task.

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Very enjoyable and nice to hear the everyday hero praised.................stan

Hi Stan,
Thanks for the read and the comment.

Gerry

Gerald Walsh

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