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Only One

These past years have
proved there’s only one,
And so will the years to come,
prove that my heart
belongs to only one

For there’s none more beautiful;
None whose soulful eyes gleam
like a beam from the moon,
Causing my aching heart
to swoon

None whose smile so radiant
can implant within me
a feeling unlike any other
Whose presence I feel more present
than the living soul of another

None I so desire
can set my heart on fire
in a perpetual flame,
At just the thought
of his name

None whose touch
I long for so very much,
Whose lips I wish to kiss
so I will not miss
him so very much

No soul so innocent and sweet,
No one can compete
With the man
with the angel heart
No, I will never part
with the only one
that owns my heart

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Structured: Western
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I love this, maybe it's just because I'm an old romantic.

Aw, thank you!

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I have had a look at this one for layout and have sent it to you in PM,
I love your works but find it hard to hold such a lot of words without a break.
I have a vague Idea that I have said this before, but we, when commenting need your feedback also.
Keep on writing, Yours Ian.T

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So find more reasons to believe in others..

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