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The poem "The Bodiless Lover" by an unknown author explores the relationship between a scientist and his lover, who is portrayed as a dream woman named Oneiros. The language used in the poem is rich and evocative, with vivid imagery and sensual descriptions. The poem is divided into two parts, each with its own distinct tone and style.

In the first part of the poem, the scientist is described as using a microscope to examine the corpuscles of his lover's skin, suggesting a desire to understand her on a cellular level. The woman is described as pouring "automatic verses" into his ear, which adds to the dreamlike quality of the poem. The use of the name Oneiros, which is Greek for dream, further emphasizes this theme.

The second part of the poem takes on a more mythical tone, with references to the First Eve and the gods of weeping. The speaker asks to be loved in the "kernel of the living city," which suggests a desire to be at the center of everything. The language in this part of the poem is more abstract and less concrete than the first part, which may make it more difficult for some readers to follow.

One suggested line edit would be to change "Drink till drunk my beloved sex" to "Drink till drunk, my love, my sex." This change would make the line more grammatically correct and easier to understand.

Overall, "The Bodiless Lover" is a complex and thought-provoking poem that uses rich language and vivid imagery to explore themes of love, desire, and understanding. While the second part of the poem may be more challenging for some readers, the overall effect of the poem is powerful and moving.

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the feel of regret, and dreams of things that were!
The second part of this write, while I am not sure; I feel that it
may have certain religious overtones. It focuses on saying goodbye
to the traditional views of propriety, and reverting to a Hedonistic life
of wants and satisfaction. Maybe?... At any rate, a good read that leaves much to think about.

~ Geezer.
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Hi Habibi
It is an intriguing piece with great imagery that is science fictiony in the first part and mythological in the second I, delightfully sensual and evocative.
The first part as I read it paints a picture with great imagery of a scientist as a lover whose eyes are as adept at getting inside his lovers glass skin as any microscope, he wants to record his viewings of her as if by photographs in his mind , it reads to me like literally he wants to get under her skin to the core
She who is a virgin with glassy skin which may refer back to the way he can see through her appears to be enticing him with automated verse a kind of sci fi reference perhaps .
Offering herself as honey, as wine as Oreiros which besides being the name of Orpheus’ father also means dream as I have learnt today, she invites him to drink of her sex until he is drunk defying and shattering all sciences and myths .

The second part introduces her as the first Eve Adams second wife after Lilith and she wonders at his ability to forget her so easily , the one that came before the Eve who became the mother of the world and humanity .
She is the one of uncontrollable tears who was borne of blood and gore from his entrails with a brain intricate as a clockwork maze, who he rejected on sight
She begs to be touched there which I assume is asking for sexual contact , as she knows she was never made for procreation as the other second Eve became the mother of humanity .
Im reading the kernel of the living city as being the centre of her sexual being .
She wants his mouth on her sex and the kisses denied in love as she was rejected when he couldn’t look at her after he saw her made from his intestines, she asks him to not follow the teaching of the Gods named in the next stanza .
Glass bodied Tristessa could be reference to sadness in Spanish or the Kerouac character the young prostitute offering herself for sex .
She is willing to die after sex , cos she she feels there is no more to be said of her story her songbook is completed and new worlds and wars is where the future lies and the poem closes by laying to rest the wifes Lilith and Eve and this dream of the First Eve the glass Tristessa .
Closing with a thought provoking question Is the Mystery more beautiful that the truth??
Now that she has shown herself and the microscopic view has been taken is the truth less attractive ………………………
It reads as a dream experience , he has the lover who is a glass figure who he is fascinated by and wants to record everything about her as his scientific mind demands she is offering herself to him as Adam her husband who rejected her , she just wants sex as love is denied her and she feels she was a mystery before and now that they have been together and her myths can be put to rest she wonders if the mystery or the reality were the better thing to have .
Hope I haven’t misconstrued your intentions as I read this fab piece my Habibi , another piece of fascinating artistry from the poet extraordinaire whose talent intellect , passion ,heart and soul come together to create this intriguing write combining science and mythology and eroticism in enthralling the reader with this piece written with great imagery , great language choices , scintillating sensuality and erotica giving a powerful delightful reading experience for this (human) reader for sure .Love it and as always if I need to edit / delete please just say my Habibi
Thanks for posting this and inviting me to read
There ends this Rant Habibi
Love Mar xxxXxxx