I know there is little that I or anyone can say to make things better. I do know your pain, I have witnessed it first hand, with friends and family. I know, that most people who deal with this problem, grow up to be fine parents and productive members of society, when they realize that none of it is their fault. I was pleased to see that you used rhyme and near rhyme. I think if you try, you can make it work all the way through. I understand that it is a difficult subject to write about, let alone think of how to make it rhyme. So, take your time; take a break from it, write about something else. ~ Geezer.
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Wow, I'm very sorry for what you went through. More than I can say. It absolutely wasn't your fault, and I hope someday you can heal enough to be okay.
I know it's sort of empty to say stuff like that, but I genuinely mean it.

I hope you're doing marginally better at the moment. And I'm glad that you got away from toxic people. Again, I'm so, so sorry you had to go through this.

that if anyone should have picked up on it, it should have been the doctors. Sometimes, people put so much faith in the doctors and hospitals that they don't think about whatever else might be wrong. They just go along with whatever they say. Unless your Mom had something else to go on, she could very well have been oblivious. No one thinks that the very people that are supposed to love and protect you, will do something to hurt a child. Sorry that you have had to deal with this. ~ Geez.
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