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Misty mammoth mountains

Submitted by Edward nigma on Thu, 2022-04-21 10:37

The heather
bearing
her masterful
mane of
misty mammoth
mountains that tower
over my eye .
Yet still cower beneath
that blissful
bluebird sky .

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Editing - rough draft
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Not Explicit Content

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Candlewitch

Thu, 2022-04-21 10:55

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I see that you made it through Friday okay. how are you feeling?

p.s.
I'll be back to comment on your poem later.

*hugs, Cat

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Edward nigma

Thu, 2022-04-21 14:26

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I have it tomorrow

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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Jackweb

Fri, 2022-04-22 03:15

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There are times the freezing fog covers around the mountain top, and it is evident that you will definitely have a blur vision; so to see clearer above the sky is impossible!

"Poetic license
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the free will to
embroider a good tale
and deviate from the established rules of language"~Jackweb

Candlewitch

Fri, 2022-04-22 08:50

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my prayers and thoughts are with you.

Hugs, Cat

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