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Misty mammoth mountains

The heather
bearing
her masterful
mane of
misty mammoth
mountains that tower
over my eye .
Yet still cower beneath
that blissful
bluebird sky .

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I see that you made it through Friday okay. how are you feeling?

p.s.
I'll be back to comment on your poem later.

*hugs, Cat

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I have it tomorrow

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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There are times the freezing fog covers around the mountain top, and it is evident that you will definitely have a blur vision; so to see clearer above the sky is impossible!

"Poetic license
gives
the poets
the free will to
embroider a good tale
and deviate from the established rules of language"~Jackweb

my prayers and thoughts are with you.

Hugs, Cat

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