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An uncanny calling

Submitted by Edward nigma on Fri, 2023-04-28 21:15

A cool uncanny calling
crucially crawling
into my ear .
Its valiant voice
of vigilance
vigorously
veering my
uneasy eyes
towards the
skittishly obscured
skies of what
lies beyond
the bend .
Where clarity’s
condescending
clutches never
dared to dwell
within the future’s
unforeseen
seams of
unfulfilled
dreams .

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Geezer

Fri, 2023-04-28 23:01

I am impressed...

with the alliteration, and the smoothness of the lines. This piece reeks of innermost thoughts and swirls with what if's. I like this a lot! ~ Geez.
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Edward nigma

Sat, 2023-04-29 09:25

Thank you geezer

I was inspired by the first 8 minutes of the animated short of Johnny Appleseed. Which gave me the idea of a voice veering you into venturing towards the unknown trails of the future .

https://youtu.be/kloQqdrnHkM

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Lavender

Mon, 2023-05-01 23:08