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Me analysis

Sometimes I think
I am a bitch
In what I say
In words so rich
With cynicism and rhetoric
With harshness
Which makes you sick
And evil thoughts
Wishing death
On the worst
of my soul mates

And then the other side of me
Sycophantic trickery
Verbose jocose jollity
Elegance bathed with prudity
Lack of meanness sweetness dripping
Kindness oozing,soft voiced lipping
One of these is the real me
Which of these do you see?
My black and white personality
Jekyll and Hyde mixed easily

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Comments

I really liked this one, I am not sure what I see I dont know you well enough lol I'll get back to you on that

good poem and I enjoyed the read

hugs Jayne-Chloe x

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

The yin and yang of us all. The truth of who we all are. I heard a story once of a small boy who asked his grandfather about his good and bad self. He wanted to which one he would grow to be. The grandfather said we each have two wolves within us the good and the bad that fight to win over each other. The boy asked which one would win. The grandfather said... The one we feed.

I'm not a literary technician.Structure, syntax, meter, rythm and rhyme are not my fort. I do know what I like and I like this one. I can feel the passion and authenticity in this. Well done by my measurement.

Joe

My mind's writing cheques my body can't cash.

a dual sign
Gemini Saggy Piscean or Virgo
then I shall let you know
but till then
I must say
yourself never betray..

loved

A good write, and a bad write, Yours, Yenti, Sparrow and Ian.T.
He, He, He.. guess which belongs to me..

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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