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Oh, love
I know not how
The Heaven’s above
Breathe that vow
In which all life,
Sings without care
Sweetness in the
Palpitating air
When shall it rain
Down from the skies
To relieve the yearning
Of my deepest cries?

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Structured: Western
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I enjoyed this thanks x

you! c:

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...but, quite simply a lovely piece. it could...with work, transfer well & easily to an Ode.
It also read nicely, aloud.

Neopoet is "newtriffic" !
...from the heart, or a reasonable faxcimile;
david a. goodwin #{:>{)} @==

you very much! (:

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