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Little Noises

There are sounds we never hear
Like spiders walking across a mirror
Or ants moving tons of sand
And bees that on flowers land
A million sounds that are so near
Yet never reach the human ear!

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Not Explicit Content

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I wonder if this is a repost. I'm sure I commented on it.
Love the theme and how simple it reads yet so deep and well excuted.
Best wishes.

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I wanted to see if additional comments were needed or should I expand, keep the same open or change anything from current presentation

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needed to add. See what others have to say

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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Thank you

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Simple, easy to read, as poetry should be. I liked it a lot. Alex

Thank you I appreciate your comments

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The several imageries scattered in the poem. It left you wondering and thinking... This drives ones mind to picture many things in one spot. A profound brevity.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".

~Jackweb

Such a deserved win.
Good job!

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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Thankyou.
When I wrote is I was thinking about trees falling in the woods, we don’t see or hear them but they still make noise when they fall?

Good comments
Thank you

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Thankyou.
When I wrote is I was thinking about trees falling in the woods, we don’t see or hear them but they still make noise when they fall?

Good comments
Thank you

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I read your poem, I liked it very much as none of your rhymes felt forced. I thought about things that go bump in the night!

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