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life moves on and on

The end was inevitable
now we continue
the earth continues
its STABLE

CHANGE IS CHANGEABLE
only
CONSTANT

thanks to all

let the hearts bleed for a while
can't stop
then move on
the world
the earth revolves
we also it's natures law
so abide with me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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and this is appealing to me!

i believe you want "it's STABLE" instead of the "its"

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all Neopoets who scan and give me great comments

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why don't you comment on other people/poets work? we need your help in that capacity, too!

*hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

but no one likes my bluntness
and they have no clue
what can lovedly do

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I, for one, LOVE your truth and bluntness!!!

*hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
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glad you love my
FAILINGS
TRUTH AND BLUNTNESS
all my life I have been treated
like a football
Do you also like to play
many kick around never mind
I can add you as one

this part of my poem
is ONLY fun
madam

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I like the "game" of football, but I don't like being treated like one. I got a lot of that growing up. I am blunt and truthful, too. and I come from a family of female liars.

ever, eddy
*hugs, Cat

p.s.
I like your poems

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you educate me
thanks

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stability is a much-needed commodity in this crazy world that keeps getting crazier. Nice job, lovey
~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

you are on line first time Why haven't you read and commented on my CONTEST POEM COLOURFUL I wonder still
my poetric master thanks in advance+

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Don't know how I missed it! ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

Gee I'd love to hear from thee

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