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life moves on and on
The end was inevitable
now we continue
the earth continues
its STABLE
CHANGE IS CHANGEABLE
only
CONSTANT
thanks to all
let the hearts bleed for a while
can't stop
then move on
the world
the earth revolves
we also it's natures law
so abide with me
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Ray Whitaker
Fri, 2022-03-18 21:46
You are becoming more organized, in your own way
and this is appealing to me!
i believe you want "it's STABLE" instead of the "its"
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lovedly
Fri, 2022-03-18 22:16
Thanks to you all and
all Neopoets who scan and give me great comments
Candlewitch
Sat, 2022-03-19 09:55
dear lovedly,
why don't you comment on other people/poets work? we need your help in that capacity, too!
*hugs, Cat
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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lovedly
Sat, 2022-03-19 11:12
Cats yes I do
but no one likes my bluntness
and they have no clue
what can lovedly do
Candlewitch
Sat, 2022-03-19 11:20
lovedly...
I, for one, LOVE your truth and bluntness!!!
*hugs, Cat
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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lovedly
Sat, 2022-03-19 13:49
Cats you I believe
glad you love my
FAILINGS
TRUTH AND BLUNTNESS
all my life I have been treated
like a football
Do you also like to play
many kick around never mind
I can add you as one
this part of my poem
is ONLY fun
madam
Candlewitch
Sun, 2022-03-20 07:19
dear lovedly,
I like the "game" of football, but I don't like being treated like one. I got a lot of that growing up. I am blunt and truthful, too. and I come from a family of female liars.
ever, eddy
*hugs, Cat
p.s.
I like your poems
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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lovedly
Sun, 2022-03-20 11:45
Cats
you educate me
thanks
Geezer
Sat, 2022-03-19 08:38
Yup...
stability is a much-needed commodity in this crazy world that keeps getting crazier. Nice job, lovey
~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Sat, 2022-03-19 11:16
wow Gee
you are on line first time Why haven't you read and commented on my CONTEST POEM COLOURFUL I wonder still
my poetric master thanks in advance+
Geezer
Sat, 2022-03-19 15:09
I'll go look for it...
Don't know how I missed it! ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Sat, 2022-03-19 15:11
Hopefully
Gee I'd love to hear from thee