Lovely, I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and the simplicty of your poem and the way it built and came together at the end. Ruby :) xx

tribute to life and one's living contribution to it.
Yes, we are all together in this world, let's live in it like we all belong.
I like the three line format, it makes for a sharp picture,
rather than long lines blending the whole thing into one big blur.
Nicely done! ~ Geez.
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Unusual rhyme scheme which does a good job of avoiding a sing song effect. I also enjoyed the theme of how we can none of us avoid getting older. But I still fight against it lol

picture engraved in my mind. I can envision sitting with an old friend, a family member or significant other and reminiscing about life. Your poetry always seems to enfold your reader in what feels like a gentle hug. Always a pleasure to read!

Great reflection of our changing lives. Liked the rhyme and the total effect of the poem

Hi Lavender! Can I just say that your work is absolutely lovely. And this particular poem is just…magical. Really. I don’t know how else to describe it except for that it was bittersweet nostalgia with an undertone of hope. Thank you for sharing! :)