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Dear Hanh

Your eyes
Rose above the hill
So many had failed to climb
What did you find?
(your answer here, please)
Oh, dragonfly.


Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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How does this theme appeal to you?
Last few words: 
Cultural differences need time and patience to harmonize.
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Not Explicit Content


a surprise ending is always an eye-opener! I agree with the sentiment behind the poem, and I'm glad to have read it.

*hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

I'm a fan of bravity, and this is an excellent example of succinctness.. I might not have gotten the full message yet I still appreciate the thought.
I too had to agree with your last words. I'm one of those who come from a very different culture to most of those fellow poets who post here, which makes me consider and reconsider what I post before I do, so that I won't be misunderstood.
Thank you for sharing.


Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words ........Robert Frost☺

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There was hope. I was really trying. Thanks for all your comments and keep thinking the future will be brighter and friendlier. Cheers all.


. like my lost dreams...the flood

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