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Rain-drop
Member since March 2, 2011
Member for 15 years, 3 months
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I Miss It
I sit in the sun
The warm loving sun
And yet curse its radiant rays
I hear the quiet chatter of the birds
But cover my ears in dismay
The palm fronds sway in the breeze
Brushing the painted sky
Yet i would quickly trade it all
To sate a longing sigh
I miss the green, the gray the blue
The mist that covered the ground
The rain, the blessed pouring rain
That made such a calming sound
The mountains that climbed into the sky
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On my every side surround
If only i could wander paths
That the remaining world forgot
Hear the sharp piercing cry
Of the beautiful soaring hawk
I miss the eagle, i miss the bear
The fresh printed tracks of a snowshoe hare
I close my eyes and I'm almost there--
But
I am here, that is there
And for now here is where i will stay
To serve my time beneath the sun
And it's beautiful radiant rays
If you ask me how I'm doing
I'll say fine
Then wipe a tear
From mine eye
Rain-drop’s timeline
- March 2026
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02 MonAnniversary
15 years of membership
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10 years of membership
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5 years of membership
- March 2012
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One year of membership
- March 2011
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17 Thu
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16 WedReceived a critique
on I miss it from @scribbler
"As a former navy brat I can identify with missing a former home left behind. I really enjoyed this but have a few ideas you might consider : L-15 on my every side surround 9 rest of poem is in first person ) L-17 try th…" -
16 Wed
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09 Wed
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08 Tue
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08 TueFirst critique offered
on "Above The Storm" by @paul
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03 ThuReceived a critique
on Teddy Bear from @Arrow
"I liked these lines best: He rests his small paw on it That cursed transparent barrier Threaded tear runs down his felt cheek because they gave me the impression the action was occuring *now*, that I was watching it in…" -
03 ThuFirst publication
Teddy Bear
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02 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I am a high school student in Hawaii and a military child. What i write tends to be of lesser quality, but i will keep trying and hope that i can learn a lot from all of your guys' criticism. I love to read, write, draw, paint, run, and most of all, play the piano. I have been known to sit down for hours and play and play and play...
Thank you so much for the support everybody! =)
Location: USA
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