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Some poems are square but others are round
Some weave in out and around
They tend to go places that are cool and unique
And reading your poems sure is a treat
They make me laugh and joke and smile
Others make me cry for a while
All are beautiful in their own way
So if your a poet, hear what i say
You are unique special and loved
And all of the norm, you rise above.

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Last few words: 
Just a pick-me-up, with so much negative stuff in the world, we need some things to remind us to just be happy and smile. Love y'all, and remember that you ARE unique special and loved. =D
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Comments

that I can add to what Yenti has said, but I see the potential here. You have a good sense of rhyme, but not much regard for meter. Work on the meter a little more, and I see you becoming one of the great poets here. ~ Geezer

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