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W E N D

Submitted by Esker on Thu, 2011-09-15 14:05

strata
through fingertips
each fire flare strand
a wind free fragment
entirety bewitched
a shoulder length
crown
for jewel light

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Esker

Thu, 2011-09-15 14:07

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I have loved red heads
drawn to them
enigmatic symbols
from history

(this is about manes)

and a fave mermaid

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Geezer

Thu, 2011-09-15 14:21

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I find your sight intriquing and I see clearly, your love of womanhood. I did wonder about the title though. ~ Gee

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Esker

Thu, 2011-09-15 19:28

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like a river that wends
this and that way
we seek muses
and loves propulsions
in the exciting and ordinary
stars that gleam off our rail
our craft
our paths
on the great voyage of life

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