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Untitled Musings

If the day
contemplated a year
I have lived lifetimes
in an hour.

if a moment
could have moulded me,
it was this one

when our atoms danced
at first contact,
the static rubbed
at uncomfortable,
I felt the sting that said
‘stand sharp’

I watched the blue
of your eyes
cloud with a storm,
your fingers twitched

as I unfolded my wings,
burnt, torn and scarred,
you raised your hands
and with the balm of your palms

my wings were bandaged

I now soar
as you watch

I fly the tempest
that in your eyes spreads,

now I ride the lightning
embraced in a thunderclap

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Beautiful write, from someone very talented.
Hope you are keeping well these days,
take care,

where were you?..welcome back ...nice to read this one....why did you get stuck up with a title? will keep tab on this one to see what title you come up with...i will scratch my head too and see if i can come up with something...

much love..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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