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KOMETOZE

the white blur
like an albino dream
black satin filled with crystal wishs
star fallen in the faded well

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I misspell my titles
love mispelled stuff
love homemade signs
for things too
Like Keep Of Gras
No Traspessing
Dont puch snow on
windews
etc

this was about a comet I saw one year
a year of oddness like a frozen comotose
thought extended like a blurry snowflake
on the eyelash at night
beautiful and out of focus

like the z like prozac Was on that once too
Like that you like my blurry poetry
the out of focus vision

thank you

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