Was a bit concerned it might be interpreted as childishly smutty but do honestly feel it contains some pertinence, along with the humour, cheers, Jess

Samuel Johnnie Green

17 years 11 months ago

Not At Alll

It's good to read humor poems every once in a while. Good Job.

weirdelf

17 years 11 months ago

ta

(ta= English for a personal thankyou) cheers, Jess

Candlewitch

17 years 11 months ago

:)

I enjoyed! Always, Cat

weirdelf

17 years 11 months ago

ta , Cat, value your opinion

cheers, Jess

Linda Moses

17 years 11 months ago

Jess

Very clever use of words

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 11 months ago

A smile is all I got for this

.) Donnie/Sinbad

autumnphoenix

17 years 10 months ago

Another smile

from me for this one. Good job. :) Dana

weirdelf

17 years 9 months ago

Smiles are my reward.

cheers, Jess

orgami

17 years 9 months ago

Enjoyed this

minds machinery moving results humorous and amazing

rider68

17 years 9 months ago

Hi Jess

I came and read tasting as it now lingers upon my tongue..... Be well my friend.... Peter ~~~"I am not afraid of tomorrow, for I have seen yesterday, and I love today."~~~

Kailashana

17 years 9 months ago

cat got your tongue? ;-)~A

cat got your tongue? ;-) ~A

weirdelf

17 years 9 months ago

Cat? No, it's quite safe where it is.

cheers, Jess

Electric Blue

17 years 7 months ago

Kinda lingers

WoW What can I say. Amazing mmmmmmmmmmm Great play on words. I feel it taste it. I want more Amazing mmmmmmmmmmmmmm Electricblue

weirdelf

17 years 6 months ago

ah, don't we always want more?

and why not? cheers, Jess "A poet's work: to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world and stop it going to sleep." Salman Rushdie

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