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Sinbadthesailorman
Member since November 4, 2010
Member for 15 years, 6 months
The Wayfaring Stranger
I set out to sea to see what I could see
I came upon a rock that was being mocked
I saw these scenes before my eyes I cried
I was a wayfaring stranger in a land within; danger stranger
A land not meant to be, a land I wished I have had never seen
The sights of terror, the sights of dread, and the home of the living dead
I set out to sea once again a stranger man than Din I thought; a water barer
I ought to be forgiven and then I realized that it was I whom was naught
The sun beat upon my brow and I sat and wonder how I was taught the lies
Of Space and Time I know not much but Life and indifference I am a Master
A Captain of a rotten ship that lists to one side or the other; disaster portrayed
Success is only seen as stars upon the Horizon; the boiling Sea sees me not sun dried
Tied to the Mast as if the winds did blow cutting skin and garments so; such is failure
I tailored my own boots and I walked in them deeply with rusted sword at my side
I set out to sea to see what I could see only to find out I was blind to every lie
A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man
Sinbadthesailorman’s timeline
- November 2025
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04 TueAnniversary
15 years of membership
- November 2020
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04 WedAnniversary
10 years of membership
- November 2015
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04 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- December 2013
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22 SunReceived a critique
on The Wayfaring Stranger from @scribbler
"The alliteration and assonance were a lot of fun and nearly toungled my tang lol. A few thoughts: stanza 2 line 2 "..I have had never seen" I Think I know the reason for this but I also think it is too disruptive to the…" -
01 Sun
- November 2011
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04 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2010
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05 FriReceived a critique
on Fire Engine Blues from @Geezer
"I really liked this, but think it could use a few tweaks to improve the flow. 1] harden[ed] 2]But yet [ , ] 3] does 4 [d]eveined 5 Underrated] [ 'twas ] other's 6] Who [ would ] 7] Debased now [ , ] 8] ablaze 9] Limbs d…" -
05 Fri
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04 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- July 2010
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19 MonReceived a critique
on Within the Shepherd’s Heart from @weirdelf
"Your choice, our choices, no strings. I admire this more than every poem you have ever written copacetic great word! The heard [herd?] needs one good whack across its back You know I don't like religious poetry but you…" -
04 SunPosted a poem
The Hostess wit the Most- est has been selected for publication @ Triond.com
"The Hostess wit the Most- est" - July 2009
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12 SunPosting milestone
100 poems posted
- January 2008
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15 TueHighest posting month
January 2008 — 28 poems
- October 2007
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20 SatMost-discussed work
White Shifting Sand has been selected for publication @ Triond.com
13 critiques to date.
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10 WedFirst critique offered
on "gardens are for growing gardeners" by @ab
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10 WedFirst publication
Injured Soldier
About Me
I am would be Poet with an alter ego. They are self publishing their works. While increasing their portions, from this treasured laden land, adding to their chests daily 24/7 365 days a year. Pennies from Heaven an unlimited source. Also hoping to spread their knowledge to the Lost Souls of this World. As they complete their 180 degree turn heading out of the storm; they no longer, are sailing these oceans blue. This is what I have on an About Me Page: for my Blog one of Seven now I think. When Neo went Down I went Out and I have been out for awhile now; of the box, that is. Donnie/Sinbad the Sailor Man
Location: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA
Robert Frost
Walt Whitman
Samuel Taylor Coleridge
Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls
who would cry out and to I will lend an ear
but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.
Recent Work
The Wayfaring Stranger
Fire Engine Blues
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