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A Wistful Night
My night;
a wicked witch
riding a crooked broom,
my dreams flew away
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Lavender
Fri, 2022-10-28 17:02
A Wistful Night
Hello, Rula!
Darn! A wicked witch's worst nightmare! Maybe you can get the broom fixed by Halloween. Very clever poetry! I enjoyed this!
Thank you,
L
Rula
Sat, 2022-10-29 16:19
Hello Lavender
Much appreciate the read and your kind comment.I too enjoyed writing these lines.
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RoseBlack
Fri, 2022-10-28 22:00
The difficulties
Of riding a crooked broom. Perhaps the witch starts over on the next day and things look better. A simple yet meaningful write.
~RoseBlack~
Rula
Sat, 2022-10-29 16:25
Hello BB
Always great to see a new friend on my page.
Your comment adds to my day and I too hope things to get better quie soon.
Thank you.
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Seren
Mon, 2023-02-13 13:51
Dear Rula
I thought this was wickedly good.
Well done and congratulations on your win
Kind regards Jayne
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Rula
Tue, 2023-02-14 15:33
Dearest Seren
I'm so pleased you're back.
I can't thank you enough for reading these lines and for commenting.
I'm not sure about winning, but I am thankful anyway.
Looking forward to reading some of your poetry soon dear.
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