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GLADIATOR
GLADIATOR
let the games begin
open the gates
let the lions in
teeth sharp as a surgeon’s steel
let them rip deep into my skin
spill my blood on burning sand
I still have one hand to show
ready to strike death’s blow
let them all in
I have won many times before
and will win again
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Comments
Timbo
Thu, 2011-08-11 11:03
I kinda like this one! Well
I kinda like this one! Well done.
Tim
Geremia
Thu, 2011-08-11 11:10
thanks, Tim. my blog explins
thanks, Tim. my blog explins this one.
joe
Geezer
Thu, 2011-08-11 19:28
Having read...
your blog, I better understand this one. I see it clearly. ~ Geezer
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