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A window to the mind
I wished for little window, so I could see the mind. The person could be sleeping, and I could be polite.
Through that kind of window, many people could look by. And all that they would see could be the dreamiest of their mind.
I hope, wish and act on the one true, desire.
Be good to people, and act kind.
I hope, that people would not look outside.
As the window is the true heart of mine.
Even thou sometimes, I may seem, not such a polite.
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