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My eyes are blind. Because of two reasons. First, of all, I do have a blindfold on them.
Secondly, nobody asks me about them, and of their color.
Today, without attention.
Tomorrow, maybe I will be a little more mature.
I will conjunct the words into a sentence.
I will see.
It’s a waste of time, for a talk with an eyes turned towards your way.
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Mon, 2024-04-15 05:11
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