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It's Time!
Has
Anyone
Poured the
Pinot,
Yet?
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Searching for something to celebrate with fellow poets!
L
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
RoseBlack
Wed, 2023-11-08 19:14
A glass
Of Pinot sounds great! I love the different format that you have used. What is this one called?
~RoseBlack~
Lavender
Wed, 2023-11-08 20:41
Hello, Carrie!
I think it's just an acrostic poem using as few words as possible. A bit different, but I was kinda in a sassy mood.
Thank you for reading! Cheers!
L
RoseBlack
Wed, 2023-11-08 20:57
Love it
Your sassy poem is fabulous! Well done!
~RoseBlack~
Lavender
Wed, 2023-11-08 21:14
Thank you, Carrie!
I appreciate you joining in the little celebration!
L
Ruby Lord
Thu, 2023-11-09 05:29
Ha ha, this was brilliant,
Ha ha, this was brilliant, loved it. Well done, Ruby :) x
Give and grow - let's raise our verses together. I'm happy to comment on your work and appreciate a comment on mine.
Lavender
Thu, 2023-11-09 15:58
Hello, Ruby!
I'm glad if it made you smile!
As always, thank you for reading!
Cheers!
L
Geezer
Thu, 2023-11-09 10:34
I guess...
that the pouring of wine, might make anyone HAPPY. Nicely done! ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
Lavender
Thu, 2023-11-09 16:00
Hi, Geezer!
Wine, and good friends...and poetry!
Thank you!
L
Candlewitch
Thu, 2023-11-09 10:50
dear Lavender,
there is nothing like a glass of good wine to make one feel fine! I very much like your poem :)
*love, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Lavender
Thu, 2023-11-09 16:02
Hello, Cat!
Wine, and lovely conversation with wonderful friends.
Thank you for reading!
Cheers!
L