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Title: I will re-learn

Poem text:
How to smile again.

All this cold rain,
will become beautiful again.

All this,
will drench me in righteousness.

Review:

The brevity of your poem creates a sense of simplicity and directness. The title sets the tone for the poem, suggesting a desire to rediscover happiness. The repetition of the phrase "All this" in the last two lines adds emphasis and creates a sense of unity.

However, the poem could benefit from further development and expansion. The imagery of cold rain becoming beautiful again is intriguing, but it would be helpful to provide more specific details or descriptions to enhance the reader's understanding and engagement. Consider incorporating sensory language or vivid imagery to bring the scene to life.

Additionally, the phrase "will drench me in righteousness" is thought-provoking, but it may require further clarification or elaboration. What does righteousness mean in this context? How does it relate to the theme of relearning how

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the same question about the meaning of [righteousness] in this respect. I think that you mean a different word like [vindication]
such as, this was not your fault. Maybe not, I don't know what you are feeling, but I think that from the way you have written about things in your life, you have felt like you were always blamed, and now, feel vindicated. ~ Geezer.
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Perhaps your writing has a meaning that is vailed.
Something that you need to search for it's
meaning. I have no idea, but to me it was great.
I would write something else, but meditate on
what's been written, but that's just me?