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Become Yesterday

It feels like yesterday already,
eternal winter ambience surrounds existence
with barren trees and heavy limbs.

Memories like bonfire embers dance
tauntingly about my ghost...
beautiful sparks: offspring of hypnotic flame
threatening to set me ablaze
even as I reach out to hold on to their warmth.

But that's the past personified;
tantalizing, promises of heat and comfort
where only burning ash remain
flickering, lilting in the air
before disappearing into cold and sordid night.

I remain alone
haunted by sparkling cinders,
memories of what will become yesterday.

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Comments

if one is to ignore the errors mentioned in Ian's comment...i find this write to be quite sombre which is in tune with the subject/essence of this write...i liked it..

raj (sublime_ocean)

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