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The world replies

The world
replies
in soft
Simple
refrain.
With the
Pleasant
Pitter patter
Of rain against
My weak white
wooden window frame.
And oh the sensational
sight of that
Superlative light
that loves to
illuminate my
room with the dark
audacious yet filled
with
Immense animosity.
The brotherly
color of blue .

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i have read this many times, and i have come to the same conclusion on every occasion, this is both positive and negative, like a tug of war if i may say, yet full of coulour , almost as if a rainbow will burst through by the end, that's the sort of emotion I get from this. always a pleasure.x

i like your title very much.

Thank you...Teddy

And it is always a pleasure in reading your opinion

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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Hello, Edward,
This is quite beautiful. I love the alliteration and the soft language. I am especially taken with the beautiful description of the superlative light encompassing the room filled with animosity. Your last line is both gentle and bold. Visually soothing.
Thank you,
L

Thank you for your opinion I’m glad you liked it

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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