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True North
Love had made mistakes.
More than I care to mention.
So, I didn’t see you coming.
The one that stood Idly by,
waiting for me to notice
the direction on my compass
pointing right there at you.
Style / type:
Free verse
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Last few words:
Another short poem to irritate Geez - LOL. Just messin' with you my friend - cheers!
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San Francisco Bay Area - USA
Favorite Poets
Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)
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Comments
Candlewitch
Sat, 2024-04-06 08:03
my question is...
Does she know how terribly in love you are?
you have the touch of genius that is all your own!
*hugs, Cat
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Michael Anthony
Sat, 2024-04-06 17:38
Well, if she doesn't know by
Well, if she doesn't know by now... - LOL! I don't know about genius, but thank you Cat. Glad you liked ti one.
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Michael Anthony
author commentGeezer
Sat, 2024-04-06 12:35
Actually...
I rather like this one. It is short and to the point.
It seems to come as some surprise and a welcome message.
Nice job! ~ Geez.
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Michael Anthony
Sat, 2024-04-06 17:39
Thanks Geez! Appreciate you,
Thanks Geez! Appreciate you, and always sharing your comments.
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Michael Anthony
author commentLavender
Sat, 2024-04-06 20:39
True North
Hello, Michael,
...and suddenly it all falls into place. This is a beauty.
L