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THE SEED DO REMEMBER

Just remember the theory of evolution
Lord god bless Darwin
Some one said the human population
is billions of years
ere
Lords and Gods are rare
not many born since say 7000 years
No one can challenge
except may be ye
who
your LORDS
GODS
only know
guys like me come to just sow
seeds as humans more so
such that the theory of Evolution
becomes like
CHANGE
permanent

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Free verse
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I know not of Lords and Gods, for the christian god turned his back on me when I really could have used help with a sexual abuse situation. then again when my first husband abandoned my and our child with the rent due. the only help I could get was to give my child up for adoption. I was very ill at the time with PID(pelvic inflammatory disease) I have since become wildling. a person who borrows bits and pieces from many religions: such as "Thou shalt not kill" and "If It Harm None, Do What Thy Will"

*hugs, Cat

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thanks to you and Gee
both of you are humanly
friendly
as GEEZ says
I'M alien

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"God" so loves the world... sometimes, it seems as though we were designed to fail at the end. Maybe you are not human?
An alien, bringing "seeds" to sow with humanity. You wouldn't be the first one. All's good, ~ Geez.
.

It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

you are YOU, and you are a wonderful gift to us and Neopoet!!!

*hugs, Cat

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And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

those who understand me r born yes
but minuscule
Thanks again

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