Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

rolls of thunder

rolls of thunder,
hear my cry

drooping rain down
from the sky

crave escape,
crave release

i dream of the place
that is made of peace

speak for me,
let them know,
theres only so far that i can go

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
this poem kinda just came up outta nowhere.. I started to cry and shortly after that, I hear thunder. My whole room's atmosphere changed. I'm trying not to make the poems too cheesy cause I feel like that's how all of my work has been. let me know what you think & thanks for reading <3
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content


A succinct poem . Read your poetry out loud. I pass this advice along as it has done wonders for my chicken scratchings

(c) No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.