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Remind Me Again
Reminders of a life once lived
a life of you
a life of sin
Do you feel me in your bones?
Do you see me in your skin?
Sink my teeth into your bloody woes
and be devoured by my love within.
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
How was my language use?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
RoseBlack
Tue, 2022-09-06 22:54
Intense
I love how you combined such intense emotions into a short verse. Excellent use of language and flow.
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~RoseBlack~