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O O O give me a kiss eh!

O O O give me a kiss eh!

hahahahaaa
you said it friend

give me a kiss eh!

never give in

when loss is assured...
but you may still win

I always advise my kids

''NO'' IS IN YOUR POCKET

BUT DO ASK

IT MAY BECOME A ''YES''

ELSE HOW WILL IT EVER

IF YOU REMAIN SILENT?

They smile and say
Give a 100 dollars
right away

I can only afford ten
they take it happy and go away
and
KISS MY NOSE FOR FREE!

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but funny.

W. H. Snow

A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley

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and as u said
never remove/unpublish
some bigger idiot will love it
and that's not bad! so be it
Sir,
Snowman glory be to thee

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you give the Kids too much money, let them earn it, each Dollar would be worth double as it will help you and also help them in many ways.
You can send any extra to me, let me know when you have some, I shall send my address then..
Take care, mind you the write needs a tidy but is good, I am waiting for another of excellence from you,
Yours Ian

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more excellent?
needing morer tidying
hahaahhaaa
Ian donno be sooooo funny
this is poetry honey
no no money
cents maybe for thee
for chewing gum may be

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When I buy chewing gum I just suck off the coating then throw the rest away, my old teeth don't take kindly to chewing much lol, Big straws and a damn good blender that's the way to go,
Have a great holiday, I have to go visit my Kin on the other side of the mountain here, damn it Sister's grandkids reaching 21.
Sadie and the children send their love as always, Yours Ian

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Brilliant, I love it, it's filled with love and family happiness.

I'm still smiling

Love Mand :)

xxxxx

silly above as per...Snow man
and brilliant as per you...
let others smile too
but thank you

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I think you can make it better...

Happy Easter to you and your beloveds.

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

thanks
my beloved now doesn't think so
hahahaah here we go
gone old .................
thank s ur still bold
to Canadien philosophy
fully now sold
its still cold!

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sorry for my comment....it was just a suggestion and no more..don't think much about it..

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

I liked it
that's why I replied it
in any case snow stated '''silly''
and mand said '''brilliantly''
and Ian smiled
you commented
it made Easter easier for everybody

now friend laugh will ye
with me
Let's all be happy
poetry is meant for a release
no!

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still lovable, I say!
I do say, sir
have it your way!

Alid

Snowman
Mand and Raj
of course Ian
and who sir?
you!

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you forget me? (giving lovedly a dirty look) grrrr.

Alid

The comments and replies bring smiles to me faster than granny tripping up the stairs lol.
No I is not cruel just a figure of speech lol.
Yours, Ian.

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c how @times silliness like this
brings Happiness
like that
brilliant idea!

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is not to be sneezed at.

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to my 2015 kiss
come alive
how nay times did you sneeze
I shall send that many cents
if you please
suffering from allergic rhinitis
can't give any more
for free
'tis allergic
as infratitus!
google you won' know
thanks though

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