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NO SPRING CHICKEN

I was already getting old
the year they first made dirt
and on that day so clear and cold
some of it soiled my clean shirt.

So I saddled up my dinosaur
to go down to the new formed river
where a dry ravine was before.
The icy water made me shiver.

The first crow egg had just hatched out
( yep the egg came before the crow)
and the first red wood was a mere sprout
it had just begun to grow.

The ocean water had no salt
'cause it was pure sans dino piss *note below
the earth was smooth without a fault
although I'd not swear to this.

I watched the whales learn how to swim
basked in polar sun ere it turned cold
Ozymandias ? Yes I knew him.
I reckon that I'm getting old.

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Structured: Western
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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*note. This line is in reference to my poem "a Taste of Salt"
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Not Explicit Content

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I, also feel my springs have sprung, lol. I like this very much, age and humor!

*hugs, Cat

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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

It takes some humor to deal with age

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I remember you! You lived down the road from me and we went to school together! I was the one who dipped little Wilma's pigtails in the dinosaur shit. LoL This was lots of fun! Had a great laugh! ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

yeah the continents were drifting so fast that walking to school was up hill both ways.

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made me smile. Another piece from you that is so well done, Sir!

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Thanks for taking the time to read

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reading your comments made me laugh and what a price had i to pay guess two implants fell broken i am doing nothing as of now except till two more are broke meaning i'm broke ha ha

they can break our bank accounts and our boys but they can't break our spirit lol

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