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Neopoet Challenge: New Years Resolution
12 to 32 lines
I have vowed to make no more Resolutions,
for this or any other, wintry new year.
too many years end with embarrassed regret
all good intentions go by the wayside here.
Instead, I relax my outstanding will power
awakening anew in my energy restoring bower,
having reflected on my future in my good time
opening my sleepy eyes to find sunshine's shower.
I shall consult my heart, as well as my head
knowing I will find good consul within and about me.
I will breathe clean air and taste the fruit of the land,
Finding Mother in a pristine guise and allowing her to be!
Review Request (Intensity):
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How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
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Comments
Geezer
Sat, 2023-01-07 12:35
Though Spring...
is still yet far away
I hear it calling
through the words you say.
This might be me as I open my windows for the first time in Spring
My New Year's resolutions hanging out with the curtains and breathing anew.
This theme is great, and your language and rhyme likewise.
Thanks for this early day.
~ Geez.
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Candlewitch
Sat, 2023-01-07 17:06
dear Geez,
I only wish I could conjure up the real thing, *sigh...
*loads of hugs, Cat
*
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RoseBlack
Sat, 2023-01-07 12:45
I did not
make a resolution this year either. All I can do is hope for a much better year with positive changes...and of course wait for spring to arrive!
~RoseBlack~
Candlewitch
Sat, 2023-01-07 17:08
dear Carrie,
this year, resolutions just seemed so pointless, didn't they?
*hugs, Cat
*
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Lavender
Sat, 2023-01-07 17:25
New Year's Resolution
Hello, Cat,
This is soulful and warm - I love it, and I am onboard!
L
Candlewitch
Sat, 2023-01-07 17:31
I hear ya Rula!
and thank you for the encouraging comments . you are always so nice to me and I appreciate it.
*hugs & love, Cat
*
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Lavender
Sat, 2023-01-07 17:43
I am totally flattered
that you called me Rula! :)
L
Candlewitch
Sun, 2023-01-08 08:14
Oh No!!!
dearest Lavender,
I am so very sorry! you are both fine poets and I love you both so much! I can only attribute this mistake to I've been trying to get caught up in my reading and commenting...please forgive?
*hugs & love, Cat
*
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Lavender
Sun, 2023-01-08 11:09
Hello, Cat,
All good, of course!
Cheers!
L
Candlewitch
Sun, 2023-01-08 14:44
thank you dear Lavender...
*many hugs, Cat
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Rosewood Apothecary
Sat, 2023-01-07 19:03
Woah!
This is gorgeous. There’s nothing I don’t love here.
Tim
Candlewitch
Sun, 2023-01-08 08:17
*Smiles :)
thank you, Tim.
*love & hugs, Cat
*
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