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Mountain Climbing In Switzerland

Mountain Climbing In Switzerland
... sitting on a mountaintop in Switzerland
Looking down on the glaciers below
As they empty into a small See,
Their melt rushing down the mountain in an icy torrent
Of dissolved minerals and melted snow
–––––––––––––Below my feet,
And we've built a small cairn
–On this mountain ridge
––Where no one has been
–––––For such a long time,
Maybe never ...

Trees turning gold in the Autumn light,
Scattered among the firs and cedars;
Are they beeches and oaks?
I don't know, it doesn't seem to matter:
We've got a mountain cat for a friend
And yesterday,
––––We were on the Matterhorn!

Don't know where I'll be tomorrow
––––Maybe on some high mountaintop
Looking down on the valleys below;
––––Alpine flowers in blue, yellow, or white
So many species from every family
––––Dancing in the grass in the autumn light
Their cousins are in the valleys below
––––Where the air is warm and mild
And we're up beyond the tree line
Almost where no plants grow
Just bare dry lichens clinging to the rocks
––––In the cool sunshine's glow.

We're clinging to the rocks
––––Trying not to fall so far
Up above the birds and the trees
––––We can touch the stars ...

We're up here alone, not a soul around
And the rushing of a glacier fed torrent
Is the only sound
Filling up the clear blue sky;
Piles of gravel and sand chipped away
From high mountain crags
By the ice that never melts away;
Our cairn is made from the splinters
Of weather chipped rock and stone
So many shapes and colours for a cairn on a mountain,
Perched up there all alone.
Are they Micas and Schists,
––––Marbles and Shales? I don't know;
I'm no geologist
––––Sitting on top of the world
Where only cool breezes blow
––––Watching the dying sun go down
In a blaze of glacial light.
––––We bathed in the glacial torrent,
Green and murky with dissolved minerals;
––––It tastes like new snow
All fresh and white,
––––So icy, it burns going down.

Mountain sheep, long furry hair
––––and chunky bells tingling
They almost let you touch them
––––before they slip away
––––––––into the cool mists
–––––––––––of the dark mountain ...

When we come back down,
We'll run all the way
As the sun falls behind a ridge
At the end of the shortened day;
We'll cross the glacial torrent on a stone bridge,
For we must hurry,
It's dangerous up here
When the sun goes down
And the black squirrel with tufted ears
Beckons us go ...
There's a mountain goat in the valley
Where the torrent plunges below;
A treacherous fall for us
Is an everyday walk for him
In deep cleft gorges where the icy waters flow,
Climbing up and down sheer cliffs
We could never dream of daring.

Beyond the snow
––––there's only glaciers and rock
––––––––gravel beds and green mud, soft and fine
Our cairn is a lonely beacon
––––for other hikers to see ...

The Matterhorn was such a grueling climb
––––Up to Schwartzersee and beyond
I never thought I'ld make it
––––The air's so thin and cold,
And the climb so steep.
––––You see nothing but rocks and trees
––––––––For most of the ascent;
It's only when you're finally there
––––Where the view of the Matterhorn is spectacular
––––––––Better than all the photographs
––––––––––––That you know it was worth the pain ...
We'd have gone all the way,
But the trail was under repair

The climb up to Adelweiss and Stift
––––Is just as steep and hard
But the view up the gorge
––––Is superb, truly gorgeous!
And you don't feel the pain
––––Of climbing, one rugged step up after another
––––––––On and on
––––––––––––Seemingly forever ...

Perhaps someday, we'll die up here;
We could have yesterday
Making our way down the Matterhorn
Following our own trail that didn't exist!
Another set of statistics
On the Matterhorn's barren slopes,
But the adventure is worth the risk.

And tomorrow perhaps,
––––We'll try again!

(Zermat, October 1985)

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My brother and I really did run into a spot of bother coming down from the Matterhorn: At my suggestion, even though it was already dusk! – we decided to find our own shortcut, since the trail up was rather boring. WE did get bogged down on steep scree slopes and dense thickets of shrubs. Afterwards, we went for a meal with our Irish buddy (who wasn't into these gruelling hikes up mountains) and then to a disco until the wee hours. The next morning we got up and did the hike up to Adelweiss and Stift. Although I had had a taste of Altitude sickness once we got high enough up towards the Matterhorn, I had got over it by next day. (It was awful, so awful, my brother, who had been following my mad pace up, suggested I stay where I was while he finished the hike up. Instead, I slogged it out, laggardly. I had to rest every fifty paces to catch my breath and I felt awful.) This is a bit longer than the other poems and other ones that involve climbing mountains are even longer, so I shall only post this one on here. I might post one called "The Girl From Norway" and perhaps some others indicative of Back and Forthing it.
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this is epic...

*hugs, Cat

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Thanks! It felt almost epic at the time. But, compared to some of my climbing experiences, was actually relatively tame! Unfortunately, I have yet to write about climbing a mountain at the boundary between the Yukon Territory and the Northwest Territory ≥200 km above the Arctic Circle in the middle of absolutely nowhere in which, because it was a dangerous scree slope of boulder scree, I actually fell faeefirst off the blooming' mountain! And the climb up Claque Mountain in Kitimat (in which I went straight up) and should have lost my life on, has been written about in two inserts (kappa and lambda) in Vancouver, Urban Legends, but the two inserts are too long to publish on here. (Other climbs were nowhere near so potentially dangerous, although, Wolverine Mountain n the Bowron Lakes Park, had the potential to be dangerous, especially as we typically did not follow the prescribed route, but kind of found our own way up.) That climb in the territories in 2016 was the only one where I actually fell off a bloomin' mountain! Sure buggered up my knee.

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did your knee fully recover? I hope you are well.

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you must use the sea
1985 everyone had plenty of time so
EPICURIAL YOU COULD BE
but today no one will read an EPICURIAL
not even GEE
all are busy

I had used ellipses
jess kicked me
but I C ur using ---------------------------- long lomger longly------- ----------- ------------------------------so all be happppppppppppeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Actually, I used something else. If you have an Apple computer, option - gives you – and if you want to make longer dashes, just type them one after the other like so ––––––––––– and you can make a dash as long as you like!

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apple should come out like O for oranges
and banana one for longer Amazon ones
do advise them lol

I'm not sure I know what a Banana compass is! It's been a while since I have been on here lately because I finally got round to writing the acrostic sonnets for my acrostic sonnet series on Life (from a biological and mystical point-of-view rather than a personal or philosophical one). I wrote the Free Verse connecting thread last year sometime as part of another poem for summat else that didn't fit, so I pulled it out and expanded upon the theme of Life (what the hell is it and what distinguishes living from non-living?) Back in January and February, I came up with most of the 14 letter phrases to sum up ideas I wanted to write sonnets about (which is almost more challenging than writing the damn things!), but, because I was feeling pessimistic about (a) the fact that no one in Canada and presumably the rest of North America is even remotely interested in publishing anything I write and (b) no one, not even closest family and friends has even the faintest interest in my writing, I lost heart and couldn't get started. I have to say, it is thanks to the fact that people here on NeoPoet reading and commenting favourably on my poems, that I finally got the desire to finish this thing. I wrote the first one on 31st of July and the last three on 25th of August (planning to finish on this date). They are numbered 1 to 46, but topic 19 was too big and diverse for a single sonnet (Energy Transfer) so I wrote two, one covering energy transfer at the ecosystem level, the other at the cellular level, so 19a and 19b both spell "Energy Transfer". I chose to make them Shakespearian instead of Petrarchan for two reasons: I've written loads of them in the Petrarchan mode and am kind of fed up with it and (b) one has to look closely at sonnets written this way to see that they rhyme, whereas, in the Shakespearian mode, the rhyming is obvious and in small, concise poems like a sonnet, rhyming is effective.

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