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Maggiore

Submitted by Twizzle48 on Sun, 2022-10-30 07:03

MAGGIORE

The lake is long, from South to North
Magnificent mountains rise on each side
White misty clouds hover along the peaks
But to all here, it is the water that speaks
Neutrality will always be the chosen bride
And pride in a future, when going forth

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Editing stage: 
Not actively editing
Contest: 
Neopoem Of The Week Contest October 30th to November 5th 2022
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Rosewood Apothecary

Sun, 2022-10-30 09:32

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Great job. I believe you use that technique in others I’ve read and it always surprises a little. Excellent language use. Excellent theme. Great ending!

Tim

Rula

Sun, 2022-10-30 15:57

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gifted to our mother nature.
Especially like the internal rhymes and the last two lines speak volumes to me.

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Rula

Sun, 2022-10-30 15:57

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gifted to our mother nature.
Especially like the internal rhymes and the last two lines speak volumes to me.
Thank you for sharing.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words ........Robert Frost☺

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