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A LOVER SENT ME A NOTE

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2022-04-08 23:46

......and the taste of you
through oranges
I'd thought of
apples or mangoes

but anything juicy
when in love goes
first testing dose

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Sat, 2022-04-09 09:22

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quite sure where this story goes. I feel like there is something missing. ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

lovedly

Sat, 2022-04-09 12:13

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her love poem you want meto post it lol

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Geezer

Sat, 2022-04-09 23:50

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It might help.
` Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

Candlewitch

Sun, 2022-04-10 08:40

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what Geez says...

*hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

lovedly

Sun, 2022-04-10 11:28

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in the blue
Now I have no clues

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