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May 21, 2013
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Imprisoned Thoughts
The wind is roaming
while my thoughts are imprisoned
in the gentle rain.
— Rula, May 21, 2013
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Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Editing Stage: Rough draft
Critiques
Ian.T
13 years 1 month ago
Rula
An excellent Senyru, that encompasses feelings and nature as an example, though I can never think of your thoughts being imprisoned..
Yours as always, Ian.T
Rula
13 years 1 month ago
Thanks Ian
A nice compliment. I need it :)
I am happy you like it.
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