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Imprisoned Thoughts

Submitted by Rula on Tue, 2013-05-21 11:23

The wind is roaming
while my thoughts are imprisoned
in the gentle rain.

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Structured: Eastern
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Fri, 2013-05-31 18:33

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An excellent Senyru, that encompasses feelings and nature as an example, though I can never think of your thoughts being imprisoned..
Yours as always, Ian.T

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Rula

Fri, 2013-06-14 08:49

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A nice compliment. I need it :)
I am happy you like it.

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