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HE'S OUR PEACE

When it seems our Pains are much,
When our heart are badly hurt,
He warms us with His peace!

When trouble embraces our soul,
In which it can't let go,
He brings us peace!

When it seems Our tears ain't real,
Like He doesn't see it,
Let it be known that,
He sees it all!

Those pains?
He knows about it,
About the sorrows?
He'll surely wipe our tears!

The invisible Voices,
Which we echoed,
To just our pillow,
He hears!

So please be still,
For He'll give you peace,
Have you forgotten that He's the PRINCE of PEACE!
Surely He's our Peace!
Oh yeah!

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No matter what we pass through in life, if we experience God's peace, it will definitely silence every weight of problems we carry about.

Read aloud and you will find out where your question marks are wrongly placed.

Nice theme!

"Poetic license
gives
the poets
the free will to
embroider a good tale
and deviate from the established rules of language"~Jackweb

Thank you Sir
I will surely do so

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follow Onyinechi's advice and you will do well!

*hugs, Cat

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