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KH
Kristen H.
Feb 19, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the contest:

Neopoem Of The Week February 19th to February 25th 2023

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Good Morning

Good morning, I say
As I stretch the sidewalk
Making room for strangers to walk through my day
Leaving but footprints in their wake

— Kristen H., Feb 19, 2023

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: USA - Georgia, USA

Favorite Poets: Lord Alfred Tennyson, Robert Frost, Allen Ginsberg, Walt Whitman , Misha Collins, John Donne

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Critiques

KH

Kristen H.

3 years 3 months ago

Thank you!

Thanks so much!

KH

Kristen H.

3 years 3 months ago

Thank you!

Thank you very much!

Seren

Seren

3 years 3 months ago

Dear Kristen H.

I see my old cat stretching himself over the pavement in the winter sun, I'm probably totally off, but this is an excellent short poem.

I see nothing I would change or edit.

Well done!!

kind regards Seren

KH

Kristen H.

3 years 3 months ago

Thank you!

Interpretation is always up to the reader. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Seren

Seren

3 years 3 months ago

Exactly, it's the perfection

Exactly, it's the perfection and beauty of poetry it can take us all to different places and times and dimensions.

kindest Regards Seren

KH

Kristen H.

3 years 3 months ago

Exactly!

Perfectly said.

KH

Kristen H.

3 years 3 months ago

Thank you!

Thank you very much!!

KH

Kristen H.

2 years 4 months ago

Thank you

Thank you so much, Leslie!