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ENTITY ME

Submitted by lovedly on Thu, 2020-07-16 00:50

Each one of us is an entity
at times we want to behave
the way we would like to
but
then circumstances and environment
put many a restraint

we cannot act on our own
in our inimitable desired way
to that the limitation of any one
he or she
must be accepted
by the one affected

others won't know
why one behaves
in such a different way
perhaps had to

to that extent all poems
have an acceptance
great poems
posted here
I enjoy all my poets dear

Style / type:

Free verse

Review Request (Intensity):

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Teddy15

Thu, 2020-07-16 01:17

Dear lovedly

Surprised and very happy to read this beautiful work, a Lovely title with words that speak beautifully of a poet, really a great effort my friend.

Thank you...Teddy

lovedly

Thu, 2020-07-16 01:32

I am following your instructions 15

I removed it as a comment from your
She

poem and posted after modifications
let's see if some more read me
else I will take a sabbatical
from neo poets

author comment

Teddy15

Thu, 2020-07-16 03:29

I hear you but think that to be drastic, after all you are now trying a new method so you have to be patient ok? Lovedly even if one other poet leaves a comment a review or a help in hand then it's a good day no? So what I have seen you do in the past is leave poems as comments so today reach out on poems that you like and actually leave some good words or ideas you have done it for me in these weeks so I know you can. If I am your mentor I wish not to waste my time if your heart is not here. Your advice and critic is as valid as anyone's here.
Let this be a workshop between you and I, "the true art of a mentor" Don't be negative let's see what we can both achieve ok?

Thank you...Teddy

lovedly

Thu, 2020-07-16 03:55

Yes I agree 15

will follow u
dear mentor Number one
ok

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Lavender

Thu, 2020-07-16 06:38

Entity Me

Hello, Lovedly,
I interpret your poem to mean that poetry style is as unique as each individual, and this is so true. I like your title very much.
Thank you!
L

lovedly

Thu, 2020-07-16 08:51

We all are humans each one

so as no two persons are ever born alike
not even twins
all is interpolation
of our genes
each one is
ONE such an individual
distinct
Thanks for the visit

author comment

Geezer

Thu, 2020-07-16 09:14

Well...

how about that? One of the very few poems that I haven't had to puzzle out of your inexplicable, obscure way of writing.
[I'm going to be sarcastic here]; I don't know if I will be able to reconcile myself to just a single read to understand what you are talking about. Good job. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Thu, 2020-07-16 10:08