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ENTITY ME

Each one of us is an entity
at times we want to behave
the way we would like to
but
then circumstances and environment
put many a restraint

we cannot act on our own
in our inimitable desired way
to that the limitation of any one
he or she
must be accepted
by the one affected

others won't know
why one behaves
in such a different way
perhaps had to

to that extent all poems
have an acceptance
great poems
posted here
I enjoy all my poets dear

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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I removed it as a comment from your
She

poem and posted after modifications
let's see if some more read me
else I will take a sabbatical
from neo poets

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will follow u
dear mentor Number one
ok

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author comment

Hello, Lovedly,
I interpret your poem to mean that poetry style is as unique as each individual, and this is so true. I like your title very much.
Thank you!
L

so as no two persons are ever born alike
not even twins
all is interpolation
of our genes
each one is
ONE such an individual
distinct
Thanks for the visit

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how about that? One of the very few poems that I haven't had to puzzle out of your inexplicable, obscure way of writing.
[I'm going to be sarcastic here]; I don't know if I will be able to reconcile myself to just a single read to understand what you are talking about. Good job. ~ Geez.
.

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

is happiness for me
sarcasm is exclusive
to those born
as a five
5 14 23=5
Another puzzle 4 u
Gee

author comment

Another puzzle from you. Thanks. ~ Geez
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

what kind do remind lol
you r my best pal

since jess left and three others
you know
none elsebothers

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boys will always be boys
as much as
guys will be 4 ever
older guys
lol
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