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Drifting day by day

We lift our
errant eyes
waking up
to the blissful
bluebird skies.
Where there
dawns
another day
faintly
flickering
itself away .

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Hello, Edward,
So gentle, peaceful, and calm. I know you are usually inspired by music. Is that the case with this?
Thank you,
L

https://youtu.be/f2cKAbqWMLg
The song gave me the idea
of how one day fades then bleeds back into another but I know wouldn’t last forever so you better enjoy each day to the fullest because don’t know when your final day will fade.

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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Precious.
Thank you,
L

you never know. I like the thought process here. Nice job! ~ Geez.
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Writing purely for oneself, is the ultimate in defensive posture.

I try to give my advice or feelings thoughts within the form of my poems hoping it would build up an impact and be remembered . And I try to write it sincerely because it’s what I believe is the truth. Thank you geezer .

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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