Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
DIGITAL SURF
Zero and one
it's off or on
from such simplistic seed
sprouted that which we all need
All from a building block of sand
imbued with purposed imperfections
came this virtual world so grand
allowing our world wide connections
Off and on
now off....................
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.
Comments
brittle light
Wed, 2013-03-20 11:56
cool theme, and expression of
cool theme, and expression of it
there is so much we can write about
good to see you exploring a little more... beyond the woods!
Al
scribbler
Wed, 2013-03-20 17:21
Hi Al
i Do get out of the woods sometimes. I have started at least 6 poems about surfing the web and become snarled in the execution by trying for a poem of moderate length. So I tried a shorter poem and found it a bit easier. (but I'm still gonna come up with a longer one on this subject some day lol). Appreciate you dropping by for a read.................stan
author commentFrenchf
Wed, 2013-03-20 19:37
Well written
But what was that grain of sand?
scribbler
Wed, 2013-03-20 22:25
Hi french
Thank you. The grain of sand? Where did you think the silicon for the computer chips came from ? I am led to understant that the next material which be used will be diamond which can operate at much higher temperatures than silicon.............stan
author commentFrenchf
Thu, 2013-03-21 15:50
Everyday I realise how lacking in knowledge I ami
Have learnt so much from this site and its contributors. Thank you
scribbler
Thu, 2013-03-21 17:41
LOL
Different people are just knowledgable in different areas.............stan
author commentloved
Thu, 2013-03-21 21:59
and perhaps you know not still
my brain is made of golden chips
that's why that alone works mostly...
hold one...
will you
and
then some one will say
a diamond one is now on ..
whose
will be news....
the chip will ask a question
is it now on ?
or
diamond slow down
better on than off ...
so digital God give a hint
one for that
and
zero we can't say
we all know not
hence one and a dot
keep fixing a lot...
genetic progeny
in each slot
a vertical dash
and
then shall come a dot
bang on the given slot...
a one and a zero
in turn off and on
one at a time
else both shall be gone ..
pun intended
here is strong
where did I go wrong...
a dot and a dash now go on
loved
scribbler
Fri, 2013-04-19 15:20
Hi loved
Apologies for having missed your visit. I must have been preoccupied. But I Do appreciate your taking time to read this and comment.............stan
author comment