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Creation

Submitted by Rosewood Apothecary on Tue, 2023-01-17 20:40

All the countless stars
Flashed into their existence
Born of our climax

Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Rosewood Apothecary

Wed, 2023-01-18 00:33

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It’s 5/7/5.

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Jackweb

Wed, 2023-01-18 06:27

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Capitalization is another way haiku is different from traditional poetry. This poetry form does not require the writer to capitalize. While you can capitalize, it is not required.

Very impressive! Well done!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".

~Jackweb

Words.unwritten

Wed, 2023-01-18 07:08

Beautiful words as always tim x

Rosewood Apothecary

Wed, 2023-01-18 07:35

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Thank you as always.

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Geezer

Wed, 2023-01-18 09:29

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Damn! ~ Geez.
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Candlewitch

Wed, 2023-01-18 11:49

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good work!

*hugs, Cat

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Seren

Thu, 2023-01-19 13:24

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This is magnificent. You're an amazing poet and I feel honoured I get to read your work. I'm so glad I came back!!!

I've missed this immensely.

Kind regards Jayne x

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Rosewood Apothecary

Thu, 2023-01-19 13:26

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Which will get you very far. Smiles.

Thank you for reading
Thank you for your kindness

Tim

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