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Beware His Siren Song

Submitted by Ruby Lord on Sat, 2024-01-27 11:52

I tempt you with a pledge,
My hair, forever windswept.
I live life on the edge,
I’m the biggest thief, inept.

My shoes have massive lifts,
To raise my dreary voice.
My mind speaks when it drifts
The words, my fake choice.

To tempt you for your vote,
On my bible, bless this earth.
I get wrong all I quote,
And I lie about my worth.

Yes that woman had it coming.
Friends, the jury was corrupt.
I did not “sex” that woman,
Yes, we will lock her up.

Speak the voice of liberty,
Stand and fight together.
I’m a dictator for delivery,
I’ll be your Julius forever.

Chaos or dictator,
Doesn’t matter which to me.
I am the bigliest creator,
I created Covfefe.

I’m cash poor but who cares?
Who dares wins the war,
I enjoy many lurid affairs,
Is your mom free to explore?

My fans will pay to hear me
drawl about the greatest nation.
Step inside, nothing’s free,
Don’t go, give me your donation.

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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This may be a little rough around the edges, much the same as many politicians. Sorry if I offend my American friends on here, I'll be writing another scathing one soon about the UK Prime Minister and his lack of competence.
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Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Candlewitch

Sat, 2024-01-27 13:41

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It takes a lot to offend me. No worries. I'm short on time so i will have to return.

*hugs, Cat

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Candlewitch

Sat, 2024-01-27 17:38

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I love how you have taken on the persona of that Dictator. I think you captured all of the repulsive parts of that shameful example of human excrement. I really enjoyed this poem. I attracted Steven's attention with my whooping as I read!!!

this is my favorite:

Yes that woman had it coming.
Friends, the jury was corrupt.
I did not “sex” that woman,
Yes, we will lock her up.

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Ruby Lord

Sun, 2024-01-28 05:38

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Thank you, for reading and your comment, Cat.
Watching Trump from over here, we only get the edited highlights but I use YouTube for a more nuanced perspective on reports. There are a few parts I need to edit so I’ll return to it soon. I hope he doesn’t get into power ever again. He is the opposite of what any country needs as a figurehead. And we know, we had the same thing here with that clown, Johnson.

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Candlewitch

Sun, 2024-01-28 07:10

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The majority of the people are of "Sheepole mentality" and will believe anything! I just do not know what to do about it other than hoping his shameful and decadent lifestyle catches up to him! and incapacitates him. (and that is so wrong!)

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Ruby Lord

Sun, 2024-01-28 07:59

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It may be wrong but, at least it is inevitable and saying it won't make any difference. From his speeches, I reckon he's almost there. Ruby :) xx

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Candlewitch

Sun, 2024-01-28 08:07

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Goddess, I hope so!

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Candlewitch

Sun, 2024-01-28 08:10

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grew two heads, twice as stupid?

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Ruby Lord

Sun, 2024-01-28 08:23

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Two heads not even half a brain. xxx

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Lavender

Sat, 2024-01-27 18:39

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Hello, Ruby,
"Number one, she's not my type..."
This will be a hard year for anyone who wants to keep positive chi and low stress in their lives. I can't believe we are sadly back at this again...
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Ruby Lord

Sun, 2024-01-28 05:46

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Hi Lavender, Trump is a stain on your government, as is the case over here. I don’t know how our countries allowed the likes of him and Johnson into power.
On a happier note, have a great Sunday, take care, Ruby :) xx

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Unca Fez

Tue, 2024-01-30 17:02

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You seem to have captured the essence of the "Orange Clown". What astonishes me is that so many people took it to heart when he told them "Don't believe what you see! Believe what I tell you!" I don't have a lot of hope for this country. I don't see any way back to semi-nonpartisan.

Thanx,
Steve

Ruby Lord

Wed, 2024-01-31 05:14

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There are strange things happening in the polls. Over here there was one commissioned which had the Tories loosing most of their seats. It was then a witch hunt for who had commissioned it. I don't believe your polls any more than I believe yours although the Tories will lose a lot of seats at the next election. It's all smoke and mirrors for now.
Take care and stay safe, Ruby :) xx

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