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To be brave is to live

Submitted by Anna Severchuk on Wed, 2024-01-03 12:10

In the hustle and bustle of everyday strife,
There are moments that bring a touch of life,
Small but beautiful, they sparkle and gleam,
Making our existence a wondrous dream.
A gentle breeze on a warm summer's day,
Caressing our skin as we laugh and play,
The sound of raindrops tapping on the roof,
A lullaby that whispers with a soothing truth.
A smile from a stranger passing us by,
A simple gesture that makes our spirits fly,
A heartfelt conversation, shared with a friend,
Words that uplift and help us mend.
In these small moments, life finds its grace,
A reminder that joy can be found in any place.

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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Contest:

01/24 An Act Of Bravery

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

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Wed, 2024-01-03 18:10

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Wed, 2024-01-03 19:28